I forgot to post my entry from last week’s LJ Idol. I survived another week with this poem on the assigned topic…
Haunted
Two eight year old girls held hands and giggled
as they skated across the frosty lake
where Roxanne’s body
–fifty feet below–
would remain
undiscovered
until spring.
as they skated across the frosty lake
where Roxanne’s body
–fifty feet below–
would remain
undiscovered
until spring.
R.J. Keller 
Awesone! Very few words, huge emotional impact. Good job.
Wow! Great poem! I love the way it looks, too! Very cool.
Nice poem. My only comment is that you have the wrong name for your community.
“The Bren LJ Idol” is a distinct writing game from “LJ Idol.”
http://community.livejournal.com/therealljidol is the original; your community moderator can confirm that for you if you like.
I stand–or, rather, sit–corrected. I didn’t know there was more than one Idol over there or I would have specified.
Thanks for the info.
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